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I look at myself, wondering.
“You're not good enough." I accuse.
Disappointment, dislike, distrust.
Outspoken lies or whispered truth?
My reflection reiterates
Disappointment, dislike, distrust.
“You're not good enough." I accuse.
I look at myself, wondering.
I think a lot of us can relate to this. Unfortunately, too many of us push ourselves down instead of building ourselves up.
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Unfortunately true. Hopefully we can keep building each other up when we can’t do it for ourselves. 💜
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Yes absolutely!
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J’accuse! Nicely done – you not only effectively utilised the “mirror” structure of this poem, you also made it the subject in a compelling and relatable way. 🙂
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Thank you ☺️ Everything I was going for!
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We need to talk to ourselves. Whether in the form of questions or accusations.
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Definitely!
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You are not good enough? You are better than most! Good one😊
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Aw thanks Vivi! ☺️☺️
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